I was standing in front of the cave's entrance. Around the cave, there
were seven different signs warning people to keep out. I wondered what
could be in there. I had a flash light so I decided to go into the cave.
the cave was very dark and cold. The middle of cave, I heard a strange
sound neared me. I scared but I wanted to know what is that sound. I
walked continue. The bottom of cave, I saw a stone. The stone was red.
It was statue of a lady. Here had also a tree. Near the tree had a sign
wrote: " Don't touch the statue". I wondered so I touch that statue.
After a lady appeared in front of me, she told me " you are dangerous".
And bats flied from tree to me. Tomorrow I was outside the cave. It was mystery.
Your writing is really good, and your story is excellent. Well done Tevy :)
ReplyDeleteYour writing is really good, and your story is excellent. Well done Tevy :)
ReplyDeleteCool story! I like how u wrote about it! It's really mystery! The things is you've got cool words and u describe every sentences clearly and it was really easy to read! I recommenced that after the sentences"i wondered so i touch that statue" you should be more mystery than that,beside from just said a word and the bat flied! I wondered what will happen next after u were outside of the cave :)
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ReplyDeletehi, I'm Votey! I'm in YL 13. Your story is really interesting and i also would like to read your next blog. Good writing and well done!
ReplyDeleteThanks you for your commend. My next blog is I believe in ghost (Tevy). After I were outside of the cave, I was in a big forest. And in my hand had a book that described history of that cave. Then I walked to my camp neared the forest. Because I'm a explorer about that forest.
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